I know I am biased but I was so impressed and I love the last sentence, it took my breath away.
Here it is:
I love the beach, with the screeching seagulls flapping in the sky, the waves rolling and crashing against the stones. I can smell salty seaweed, the slimy seaweed feels horrible but the crunchy seaweed is fun to POP. Exploring the beach is excitng, using the shells to decorate my sandcastles. I dig for crabs with my Dad. I feel energetic running trough the waves.
Most of all I feel lucky to be here.
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3 comments:
K. writes magnificently!
That photo could be lulu - her solar suit is the same pink and blue. I find when we go to the beach it is on the days when others don't - cloudy and grey. Much safer. Our southern sun is deadly. I'll try to get lulu to write about her beach going and email it.
tim
She writes so well for a seven-year-old! Tell her to keep up the writing! Grin!
Thank you both
She wanted to write like a grown up, thought of words she wanted to use then looked them up to make sure they worked!! 7 going on 70 at times but she is a real girly girl with her friends.
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